I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Miss May.
Well done Nemani. I can see you are using evidence from the text to back up what you think about it. Where is your WALT and 1-2 sentences? Also I can spot some capital letters which need to be fixed. Can you do the same?
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Well done Nemani. I can see you are using evidence from the text to back up what you think about it. Where is your WALT and 1-2 sentences? Also I can spot some capital letters which need to be fixed. Can you do the same?
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